Again! Very good! And welcome to ficly! Only one little criticism. I think that there are a few places where a semi-colon would have been more effective and proper than a comma.
Again! Very good!
And welcome to ficly!
Only one little criticism. I think that there are a few places where a semi-colon would have been more effective and proper than a comma.
Welcome to Ficly! Remember you can sequel stories by clicking the “Write a sequel” button below any story. That said, this is beautiful. Captures a sense of raw emotion very well.
Welcome to Ficly!
Remember you can sequel stories by clicking the “Write a sequel” button below any story.
That said, this is beautiful. Captures a sense of raw emotion very well.
an artist appreciates what other artists strive to convey. Welcome to ficly Cowls.
Welcome to Ficly! Great feel.
Great feel.
The Third Robot 
Sam Ervin 
Marli 
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