*for the twentieth time
*’I’m coming’ is better than ’I’m going’
(i dont know how to explain that one)
*knocked several times on your door
Knock-door, hit-person…los dos significan pegar
*anysound→any sound

I love the music element!!!

A solemn ending. I loved it.

I get the “Im coming”, true as well.
Gracias por el de knock, podría tirarme toda la vida poniendo que la gente mete palizas a las puertas… xD

Pues se supone que al final del todo va una canción pero no me cabía. Me basé en esta, que aprendí a tocarla y va del tema:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MjnNnBNWgz0

what a story! I’m going to read beyond the errors and avoid trying to fix them.

(1) “ran way to your house” is not good. Rather “ran all the way to your house” or “ran away to your house” or “ran to your house.”
(2) “I don’t know where my strength came from” would be more correct.
(3) “veins”.