Comments on Dear Susan (5) by maxiie

H.S. Wift

Wow. I loved it. I love it more than my beautifully animated face. Very few errors for a person who doesn’t write that much english. Bravo.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

thank you very much! o the thing is that I want to study english filology (don’t know if you call it like that) so I think this is great for me as I can practice my english and people can read it, not only my english teacher haha
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

*people stare
*everywhere

Five Stars for the ending! Keep it up friend!!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
H.S. Wift

On a different note, I have never seen anyone pop out 5 stories so quickly, and in a different language aswell. Kudos.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

Well, is the same story but it was so long I had to put it in parts!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Porfa!!! pon una canción…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

la de mcfly está bien, pero pon tu propia!!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

Como? Que la componga yo? JÁ!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Catherine

I loved this ending!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gurth

HSW, I see you also write “english”. Is this American usage, or what> I have never come across this word before… can you give me any sources or examples in literature?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gurth

maxiie, rather say “two” instead of “2”, it’s normal practice. In a position like this.
“if you call it that” would be better than “if you call it like that”.
“People stare” is correct, not “people stares.” (“People” is a plural noun in English, unlike “gente” in Spanish.)
You are a fantastic writer, maxiie.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

Yes, in spanish we write the number too. two, right.
thank you!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

oh wow, very romantic.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gurth

maxiie, regarding your last comment: please don’t write “english”, “spanish” etc. It looks terrible to a sensitive eye, and it is wrong. G Up and HSW are greatly to blame for encouraging this sloppy habit. Capital letters must be used.
Look at the first comment to my story “Para Ina” and see how CAV uses the capitals. If he can do it, so can you.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

ok!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Can I just say, Gurth, it’s a comment, and in cmmnts, we cn use shrt hnd if we want. we can neglect all use of capitals, gurth. AND WE CAN NEGLECT ALL ABSENCES OF CAPITALS! Because this is a comment, and not a story, and we’re not on trial.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

i SeCoNd HsWiFt! Comments dont mattr.

(haha)

ps. in spanish, languages and nationalities are not capitalized. (american)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maxiie

…ahí estamos…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.