What a bad boyfriend. But I don’t understand how he made typos on the card if he just said those things. Unless you mean abbreviations. But that may be just me.
Really felt her sense of exasperation with the whole situation. Makes it feel like it’s a recurring theme for her to be upset with something that seems outwardly to be the fault of the flower company. Maybe a hint as to a pattern would clear that up or just a tendency towards bad luck with flowers. Cute little story.