Comments on A Dustland Fairytale by Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Catherine

Like the song by The Killers!? or is it just a coincidence? ……I wish life was a fairytale.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

That’s what inspired the title :)
Actual story was inspired by Tracy Beaker!!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lighty

Ah, what a twist! To me I read this as a very cynical babysitter telling a bedtime story, made me laugh. Minor typo- you missed an apostrophe in ‘my claw’s’ I like this a lot; not only well done, but have you read original fairy tales? They are some dark stuff.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

No typo. That is perfect grammar.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Aye, perfect grammar; She is using it as in plural of claw, and freeriding the is which automatically changes to are from the fire comparison. Great job, PJ! No T-shirt for Lighty.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
intoxicatedsmiLes

WOW! Wonderful story. Nice twist in the end. :D
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lighty

No t-shirt? Aww. Oh okay, sorry for the mistake; I just couldn’t make it read right in my mind, I think I may be becoming a little too obsessed with apostrophes right now. Anyway, brilliant story once again, and it is a great bit of dialogue.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Ha! No worries. I may occasionally mistype but I never get the grammar wrong.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Shaun Rafael

O.o Oh my goodness
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5