I love all the references! (Even those that are not italicized…) You really know your stuff!

Wow, that is all I have to say.

Do you think I could borrow your brain for my Shakespeare exam?

The new writer’s game; Grand Theft Cranium

Excellent use of the quotes to set up and allow for the material to come out with these little colorful counterpoints to bounce off of. Never a big fan of suicide as peaceful or a solution, but I get how it fits in here.

lemony snicket! no! don’t jump!
oh well.
:)
This is a really well put together piece. :)

This way of writing never occurred to me and to read it pulled off with such woks is very inspiring. Well Done.

This story was nominated for the ficly book.

Well done M.H.

Unusual and poignant. I like it.

Isn’t it lovely when things that you’re proud of have an unexpected revival in interest?

Thanks guys! MH :)

Haunting, with some surprisingly subtle literary allusions that fit perfectly into the story’s flow.

I don’t think I’ve figured out where all the quotes came from… GOOGLE TO THE RESCUE!