I love that they found comfort in each other during the chaos.

I love that they found comfort in each other during the chaos.

is this within the parameters of the challenge?

I hope it’s within the challenge parameters.
I think this is what the definition of a proper “sentence” is, and this is the most horrific, disturbing and saddening sentence I could think of.
If I’ve fussed up what I should’ve done, then…well, it’s unfortunate, is all I can say.
=)

That was sweet, and a nice way to used a whole lot of information in clauses (still one sentence) to set up a tender, human moment in the face of disaster.

I haven’t even looked at the challenge yet. By it’s own merit, however, I loved this! Very descriptive and somber feeling to it. Just the kind of thing you hope you have the presense of mind to do at the end.

I love this. The thought that these people were able to spend their last moments with the person they love is incredibly sweet. Truly brilliant.