Hahahaha the ending was so unexpected and wonderful. The titles true though, it hasn’t stopped snowing here and yet I still get my mail everyday.
This was really good comedy writing – the total seriousness of the characters makes that ending all the more hilarious! A really well-written take on the genre – I think making the reader laugh gets forgotten sometimes, this was a breath of fresh air – MH :)
This was really good comedy writing – the total seriousness of the characters makes that ending all the more hilarious!
A really well-written take on the genre – I think making the reader laugh gets forgotten sometimes, this was a breath of fresh air – MH :)
Hahaha, love it. Simple as!
I agree with the above comments.
“LETS DELIVER THE F#$%ING MAIL!” That was just hilarious! Awesome way to turn something serious into comdey. I commend you!
It’s like the Postman, but set in the year 40,000. I love it and want to give it a sequel.
Yep, Hillbilly beat me to the allusion. Fun and exciting stuff.
great comedic twist!
I F$%ING LOVE ROBOTS! This reminds me of mech-warrior, an old PC game I still play from time to time.
I F$%ING LOVE ROBOTS!
This reminds me of mech-warrior, an old PC game I still play from time to time.
I love the idea, but you could use some serious proofreading. It distracts from what is otherwise a very original and funny story.
It does need a bit of proofing, but it’s a highly enjoyable read, nonetheless. I love the “don’t talk to your suit” line. Pure comedy gold.
This is a very nice piece. I enjoy the serious tone, in the face of an absurd idea. It offers a peeking look at the world they live in, and makes me want to know more.
I love the last line, I was not expecting it.
Fun. Nice visuals.
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