The “I don’t know” parts need some kind of punctuation I feel.

I was also a tad confused by the story.

Cute. I didn’t see the gay thing coming, and I really thought this was just a pick—up going really well. Funny back and forth and nice, gentle twists to make for a fun read. I wasn’t confused like Robot there, but maybe that’s cause I’m an old, married fuddy-duddy.