This is an interesting continuation of the original story, which I’m just now reading. This story flows well, follows a similar feeling with all the dialogue… yet reveals a bit more of a sinister plot, when the reporter herself disappears. Well done!
This is an interesting continuation of the original story, which I’m just now reading.
This story flows well, follows a similar feeling with all the dialogue… yet reveals a bit more of a sinister plot, when the reporter herself disappears.
Well done!
Oh, and I totally laughed at ‘holy shit, what is going on.’ Genius.
Oh, and I totally laughed at ‘holy shit, what is going on.’
Genius.
I like the depiction of the absurdity of the event. How even reporters can “loose” it. And by it, I mean sense of location. Or possibly corporeality.
I like the depiction of the absurdity of the event. How even reporters can “loose” it.
And by it, I mean sense of location. Or possibly corporeality.
Sam Ervin
Sam Ervin
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