Oh, every girl’s dream. Sounds like Jacob Black. * drifts off into romantic fantasy * Anyway,… I really like this story, has that mysterious affect stemming from the dream of a seriously cool life that we all long for.
I think that the story set up is okay. It lacks a little bit of depth, but perhaps that is because there is more to follow. I think it just has to snag my attention a bit more.
James P Anderson
Kay-Teaze
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Raphael Bane
Shaun Rafael
stargazer1960