I think that the ka-blammm adds a somehow more comic ending to the story which doesn’t seem to be funny before that. Personally, for consistency, I’d prefer something like “Jonas fired.”
I think that the ka-blammm adds a somehow more comic ending to the story which doesn’t seem to be funny before that.
Personally, for consistency, I’d prefer something like “Jonas fired.”
You convey the panic of Jonas and the maliciousness of the Colonel well. I enjoyed. I think that the KA-BLAM was just fine. IMPERIO!
You convey the panic of Jonas and the maliciousness of the Colonel well.
I enjoyed. I think that the KA-BLAM was just fine.
IMPERIO!
N. Robertson 
The Third Robot N. Robertson The Third Robot