If that’s not love, I think it is close . I thought the story was about a breakup but I was pleasantly surprised. I like it.

I was thinking of deleting this one, after the fact…. in retrospect, I sorta worried someone might take offence (I go past that “line” again… whosh), but I suppose I’ll leave it …

Nice view of death. It’s a refreshing read. :D

Twisted and romantic at the same time, really egging the reader on to suspend puritanical judgment long enough to appreciate the anguish and loss.

I don’t think this is offensive in any way. You managed to capture the comfortable love that comes from a well developed and mature relationship. Both love and humor shine through. This is very good.

Agree with THX and Paige. How come Ficly didn’t record my rating? Boo anyway here are five more for you. Also, I think that stretching people’s boundaries is good and I don’t think you did it to be “shocking” or rebellious, so it really works here.

I love this modern take on love and death. It’s refreshing for things to not always be so sweet and cuddly. I was drawn in from the start. Great little piece!

Thanks for your comments…. I’m glad you see the artistic merit in this piece!