With such a limited number of characters, scenes such as this can be difficult. It’s a question of balancing story and action. I think that you neglected the story side a little to much and focused on all action which doesn’t have the same effect as less action with some meat behind it.

It just doesn’t seem like a whole lot actually happened.

Yeah sorry. I was running with someone else work, and I was on the verge of an epileptic fit at the time of writing this :(

I, personally, liked it. With an action scene like this, I like that the focus was on the combat…

I even felt like you captured Locke very well…

kudos.

I liked it as well. It is an action piece, and they are getting blown up, what do you mean not a lot happened?? Lasers and explosions and an irate Captain.. plenty going on for such a small space.