Yeah, I thought that was a dirty move. Not very sporting-like in a sporting environment.

Minor edits: hear as opposed to here, and likely no need to capitalize the ‘R’ in redemption unless Redemption is the name of the venue or event. Nothing too major but it did sort of throw me out of the story. I enjoyed the content. The coach has real character in the way that he speaks and presents himself. Overall, good work.

Fixed the typo.

Redemption was meant to be capitalized. It’s meant as a jumping off point for the next writer. I think it’s important to leave those hooks, not just leave the next writer hanging.

That’s pretty freakin’ bananas. You took the characters and gave them life. Awesomeness!

This reminded me of the movie Million Dollar baby…

We should all work together to protect the precious B.B.’s of the world