I liked this story, I think it is another good piece about reaching for the success that so many of us fear. Minor criticisms: Last sentence in the second paragraph the ’in’s seem too close together. So the 4 hours. Something like ‘In the same amount of time’ might be a better fit. Maybe not. Lastly, the lady’s name feels like a sobriquet or a fantasy name. I’m not saying there aren’t any Tess Truehearts out there, I’m just saying it sounds made up. Depends on what you’re going for. Or maybe a title Tess ‘Trueheart’ McGee or what have you. Still, splendid work.

Aw. It did have a nice happy ending, a little predictable, but very sweet. And I love a good musical instrument story!

Thanks for the comments! Actually I know someone with the last name of Trueheart. She’s not a Tess though. I know it sounded made up, but I loved the name.