Another cute story. I didn’t see the end coming at all. In fact I was worried about the consequences and who was going to do what. I thought people were going to die! Minor edit on the last sentence- either there should be a conditional modifier like ‘in the state of California’ or maybe drop the -est from greatest. Either / or and just a suggestion to give it a little more punch.
Nice work though.

better than in Blazing Saddles?? that was pretty great..
nice twist there, using ‘ammo’ to lead us on until the end. :)

Thanks!