Ooh, that was, um, yeah…

I’m torn on whether to laud your turn of wit or scold the stinging commentary.

Could go either way, I guess. Nice job getting it all into the ficly size while keeping sufficient content to get the point across, and firmly at that.

My intention with this piece was to remind chris Chris chris that it is important to realize that sometimes other people’s opinions of your work is important if you want to be taken seriously. If I went too far, then please forgive me: I’m new here and I’m still learning the ropes.

This was…

Brave. I think is the right word!

Still, you make a valid point, and it’s not often that we get an opportunity for some stingingly good satire here on Ficly so I’m going to relish the moment…

Nobody actually means this Chris kid any harm, it’s just about channelling passion for writing in the right direction – MH :)

Yes, brave. Saying what the rest of us were all a bit too PC to say. None of us want to degrade Chris or anything like that, and I hope she(? did I make this up?) realises this. I just hope all our comments and responses opened Chris’ eyes.

Well I am new here too. I am obviously not going to send that story to a publisher or editor. I don’t even know one! I know you were just using School as an example but I never knew so many people would get so fed up over this. It’s okay though I enjoy reading these kind of things.

Well I am new here too. I am obviously not going to send that story to a publisher or editor. I don’t even know one! I know you were just using School as an example but I never knew so many people would get so fed up over this. It’s okay though I enjoy reading these kind of things.

On reflection, I felt that I had been a bit too pointed in what I wrote. I’ve softened it without eliminating the point that I tried to make.