Wow! Realtors are so intimidating I couldn’t stand up to them there and then! This guy is one lucky chap. There’s probably a slaughterhouse in the basement, or ghosts living in the walls.
Fits the challenge perfectly – I think it’s probably the most realistic and subtly intelligent entry I’ve read…
And, perhaps unintentionally, you’ve written a wonderfully horrific character in her own right with your pushy realtor – can she have a spin-off? MH :)
The poor realtor… maybe she will get her own story. The trials and tribulations of selling houses where people died, or that are built on ancient Indian burial grounds, or that have portals to hell in the closets…