I didn’t see the realtor as a servant of the darkness, just a realtor, regualr :P
But I like the twist! Really – for want of a better word – creepy.
One small thing, it seemed a bit rushed, whereas you could have had the realtor reveal a bit more…
other than that, I can’t wait for the next part!!

Just out of curiosity…is her name a reference to Bram Stoker, author of Dracula? I thought of that right away when I read this. Sort of creepy, but morbidly funny at the same time.

I have to agree with someday_93…using the name Stoker was over-the-top in the way of foreshadowing…so when the fangs came out, I was expecting it.

I like it. Vampires are cool.

You had me at failed realtor. Bravo!