Great little story. Perhaps not the most original story, but who cares about that when you have that great little self-aware line about “This place is so small and so out of the way, Survivor wouldn’t even touch this place”? Also: Perhaps it’s because almost everyone who sees something about a deserted island immediately thinks of “Lost”, but I can’t help reading the end to your story, and imagining the Michael Giachinno score swelling to that agressive brass crescendo… Still, well done! =))
J. A. Keane