LMAOHAROFLLAMM!
(Which means: Laughing My Ass Off Hysterically And Rolling On the Floor Laughing Like A Mad Man!)
You set up the pretense that this was some kind of important police operation very well, then completely shattered said pretense, and ended the story just so completely satisfyingly and hilariously.
Excellent work!
=)))

hey those old houses are creepy! how many kids were playing frisbee?! and great twist!

Simply wonderful!

I must express my interest in what was written here through every word of the story. It starts off like a crime story, which is right up my street, and ends like a comedy, which is right up my A-hole (That’s a good thing, in my mind, I see it as meaning it emanates through every fibre of my being).

I’ll have to use that, JA, I was LMAOHAROFLLAMM too

Oh, this is too funny. I was expecting some great and grand burglary. I laughed so hard. Well done!

BRILLIANT!

haha, I’m glad all y’all like my little nonsense piece; it may not be the most elaborate, but it was definitely fun to write. ^^

Haha, this is brilliant :D The ending is just perfect, and a nice touch of humour!

I really love that last line.

Commences with Mission Impossible and ends with south park. Waaaaaa. Good one.

Very funny, the dry comments interspaced with the unfurling plan work really well.

Lovely dialogue.

How many people were playing Frisbee that night anyway? O_o
Absolutely brilliant. Not the first to say so and probably won’t be the last. :)

Haha! Very funny and clever. Beautifully written dialogue. I very much enjoyed this. Well done!