As a prologue, this is a great introduction to Kramer’s character, before the intro for Hunter. There’s a lot of subtle detail about the character that just flows seamlessly off the screen.
Well done for integrating this very well with my story.
5 pencils, coming up!
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As soon as I read it, methinks to myself, “Hunter! No! It’s a trap! Kramer’s got it out for you!”

It felt better as a prequel…
Glad you like it!