hahaha! That was great. I loved the image of the bag and the little flame and then the mat goes up. Also liked how you tied the raccoon suit in at the end. =^)

Surely, a lesson to us all.

Oh, also? First time any one has done a prequel/sequel of anything I’ve written. I feel honored =^D

Nicely done, continuing with the voice and style of the prequel. Good work and welcome to Ficly!

you took this to the next level. good job.

Sage advice: listen to a student when he suggests the racoon suit.

Very solid, great continuation.