Are you seriously trying to make me cry? Geez, this was good.

Minor edit: 2nd to last sentence, fairytale has an ‘r’ in it. :)

Wow. That’s just depressing. Your point really hammered home with this one. Fantastic writing :)

What’s depressing is that the only way to be noticed today is to commit suicide or date a good looking guy. Only criticism I have is that you might want to tell us in the beginning that she owns pills, so its not so out of the blue when she takes sixteen of them. But wonderful without.

Definitely a not-so-happy-birthday! Drugs are such a serious problem nowadays… Wonderful writing and thank you for entering!

@tilley and they are so damn expensive…
just teasin ya
nice story christina, i think nthe title gave away the end, but good anyway.
@luke get a freakin pic , they are free and its faster than gettin a cigerette. and if you are going to say you dont smoke, well there is your extra “gettin a pic time.”