I thought this was going to be a dry descriptive story, but it ended up a wonderfully cute slice of life. The last sentence really tied this together.

Also, this stories tag have really piqued my interest.

Again, thanks! This was originally written as a longer story, so I’m cheating a bit, but I’m glad this bit stands out OK on it’s own.

Very human touch here. I like the apparant innocence in the dialogue and the general flow.