Uh oh, indeed. Is he about to find out through personal experience, or is there someone else nearby who is about to go up in flames? Interesting premise. I’d love to see more of this either in the form of a prequel or sequel. Nice work.
Well theoretically, spontaneous combustion isn’t brought about by external heat :) Still this is well written and deserves a sequel. I want to find out what happened!
I just don’t think it encompasses the aspects of the challenge properly. Sorry.
Oh don’t get me wrong, this is still a great story, and it definitely deserves a sequel, it’s just that like EM said, it’s more about the cop, rather than the fire. Sorry dude.
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