Aww <3 I love her.
Like the character and tone a lot – the character description was just right. Might want to run this through a spell/grammar check, though – a few minor errors in there that took me out of the flow of the story.
Wow. This is brilliant! I love how you’ve brought it alive, and yet still retained the focus on the challenge :D And I have to agree. When did fire go from being associated with warmth and comfort, to death and destruction. The answer? Religion.
Wow. This is brilliant! I love how you’ve brought it alive, and yet still retained the focus on the challenge :D
And I have to agree. When did fire go from being associated with warmth and comfort, to death and destruction. The answer? Religion.
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