I like it, it seems like it has lots of potential while being enough of a snapshot to stand alone. My only criticism is the line about tyrants and witches felt out of place. “It wasn’t easy.” seems to sum it up better. And the following line, I don’t think requires the word ‘towards’. Oh and I think that Your Majesty, if spoken is supposed to be capitalized. Apologies for the nitpicks. I did enjoy it though.

Good points. I have made those changes. Thanks for the comment!

no, i get the line about tyrants and witches, which would be easier to execute than your own brother..