talking clouds! tornadoes to be a bit more precise to what I envision. Always a grand poobah, a mother nature figure. Way to tie in to the storm.

Has a very Old Testament feel to it, which is kind of cool.

That third sentence, the one that starts with, “The massive cloud, turns and rolls…” felt way too long, making it cumbersome and convoluted. You could also gain some bonus points if you can find synonyms to replace the frequent use of ‘dark’ and ‘cloud’.
Minor points really, just stuff to work on.