A nice rap, as raps go. Not my usual taste, but I can’t find any flaw in the execution of the rhyme.

Welcome to Ficly, if someone hasn’t done so already.

Haha niiiice !

This has a very strong rap vibe, but I like it! The “peace out post-haste” line is a bit of a mouthful.

Good entry! I couldn’t grasp the rhythm that well, but it was a fun read anyway.

And I can’t help but feel you were targeting me a little there… ;-)

Can’t wait to see how this challenge ends!

hahah you worked piss, ass, post haste, burning rubber, axe to grind, and silliness into this, bravo! I was tripped up on the ‘out ahead of you’ line, but still, bravo.

Thanks for the comments, all. This was basically me trying to mimic Eminem’s style somewhat, which should give you an idea of why I’m not a rapper. Hit youtube and listen to the 8 mile rap battles or encore to give you an idea of how this might sound if you’re interested.

And Mess – I wouldn’t say I was targeting you… specifically, at least! Hopefully everyone that read this felt a little bit affronted.