thsi writing exercise was spur of the moment junk, i was thinking: big hairy trucker in drag… didn’t convey that well.
YES MJY I KNOW EVERY SENTENCE STARTS WITH I. and I’m not gonna fix it neither! :P

It had a nice twist. I saw it coming though. hehehehe

lol thats funny hahahah

I, for one, grew to appreciate the repetition of the “I” throughout the story. I felt that it gave the pacing a pulse each time it came up, adding to the growing excitement. I paid tribute to this by starting each of my sentences with “I”.

I actually didn’t notice the "I"’s until someone pointed it out. xD Fail on my part. Intriguing story!

Never saw the end coming.

Aagh. You stole this idea from the very fore of my brain.

Typo in para 2: “to intrigued” should be “too intrigued”.

Nicely done.

thanks ethel! it was off the top of my head too, funny how we were thinking the same thing.

That was fun! It reminded me of an episode of a TV show where one of the main characters (both are men) suffering a head wound buys a wedding dress at a pawnshop. Awkward hilarity ensues.

I agree with those who didn’t notice the I’s, and didn’t see the twist coming. I also agree with those who really liked it :D