I like the idea very much. In execution, this comes across to me, because of the way you wrote it, almost as a play. I’m curious what it might have looked like if it had been written with the play form firmly in mind. I buy the flipping of the kitchen table, but not the ripping out of the sink. That just isn’t something that can be done on the spur of the moment, in the red-hot heat of anger. Typo: “let’s” for “lets”.
August Rode