wow this was a good story i really enjoyed it. i am glad i am not in this challenge.

Epic! If only we could all vault over carniverous animals in such situations.
I wouldn’t expect any less but grats on removing all the e’s first time!

Man, I can’t help but imagine Pitfall for some reason.

I thought the vault might not work, but alas, and hooray it did! that was the badass part.. yes, it had to. :)

Is it wrong that I wanted the branch to snap?
;)

“Two roads diverged in a yellow wood…And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth;” ~ Frost

I bet you if you saw the alligator in the undergrowth, you won’t have taken the road less traveled.

Supurb story, and nearly flawless without the ‘e’

Dark Hillbilly took the thought right out of my head.