Awe! This is amazing!

And not because it’s about me, either.

The power of a kiss. :O

Ah! Even though it’s about you, still no 5/5, I will get it one say. It is my life’s goal!!!

i know how to get a 5 from the magick one, but I don’t usually write that way. ;)
and i have a question, so as he gives a little magick to people, does he lose it and age?

Well, I haven’t written the rest of his story so I don’t know. :)

oh, well, something to ponder then!

wonderful mythical feel, and still you didn’t get a 5/5 from Mr. Gabriel. Man, Gab, quit hording pencils…but I respect Gab for not handing them out willy nilly…when you do get those 5 pencils, PJ, it’s going to feel oh so good.

I know it doesn’t count for much, as I feel I hand out 5s too often, and am trying to cut back, but here’s 5 pencils. They are unfotunately regular HB Wift pencils and not Gabriel’s all-powerful, glowing, magick pencils.

Gorgeous idea and well wrought as well. Loved the touch of romance instilled by having a kiss involved in the creation and then reiterated at the end. It gave a lot of importance to the kiss and seemed to act as a portent of what may happen later in his adventures.