Humming with energy, I can feel it, but several of your lines have a lot of extra syllables. You could probably trim this a bit and it would be even better.
Hmmm… So you think you can challenge the Mighty Mess? :-)
lol, you brought the challenge, but I see Mess is turnin up the heat!
Good effort in an angry-over-the-top kinda way.
Jae
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