This is a cute story to begin your term on ficly. Obviously it could do with some amending in terms of paragraphing and punctuation (which, if you send me a note, I will gladly help you with) Although it isn’t quite an original epic, it’s beautiful in its sentimentality. I like the nana’s last words. (I apologise on behalf of whoever rated 2 yet was too cowardly to leave any form of constructive criticism.)
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))