I think every man out there has a story to tell about the one that got away.

Thanks for the feedback meiz!

Very clever, I like it!

You always wonder about that girl you saw in a Starbucks once.

Mainly I went with a simple idea so I could focus more on structure and diction. Heh, dicktion.

Exactly why following your dick on a jogging path is a bad idea. Great story.

I’m giving this five purely because it’s one of the most simple and effective things I’ve seen on here. It doesn’t feel like it’s trying to prove a point and I think it’s surprisingly hard to write something casual in such a short space.

Every detail fits and it’s a pleasant change of pace.