Comments on Born This Way by ElshaHawk (LoA)

Tad Winslow

Great start to story, highly imaginative. It reminds me of a serious dr. suess story without the rhyming or pictures.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

I love the magickal elements. You imagine fae as such peaceful creatures but some are nagging sprites.
Maybe, you should decide what kind of fae they are? Defines their habits so to speak:
http://spiritualforums.com/vb/showthread.php?t=17988

i hope this gets continued though. Especially if this is a new race of fae :) Their habits will be intersting
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

oo I’d like a new race of fae… but they haven’t revealed themselves to me yet. Other than the social problems of not having enough babies, and the tension between her heterosexuality in a very homosexual group.. I have not been inspired as of yet.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Marli

What a lovely magical mind you have Elsha. This was very discriptive but I enjoyed each and every word.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Fantastic Mister Fish

OMG. I had an idea like this written down inside my head, but I could never think of good words to write it with. It looks like you beat me to it. Though… I never even thought about faeries…. hmm. I might have to sequel if you don’t mind…
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Yuriy Zubovski

Amazing reversal. Definitely going to keep watch on this; will sequel if I can come up with something worthy.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
N. Robertson

Haha, this is interesting/awesome. Very creative. Where does this stuff come from…
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Love it! Of course I do. It’s by Elsha.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

Aww, Mess! That just makes me.. want to write more! :P
- Posted over 9 years ago.