Beautiful… “…as if to remind me how to fly.” <3
Beautiful…
“…as if to remind me how to fly.”
<3
So many stunning lines in here, I can’t even pick one! I loved your use of the word ‘stories’ in all it’s senses, the variety of sentence structures, the impeccable word craft… Wonderful though some of this challenge’s other entries have been I would be dumbstruck if this didn’t win – MH :)
So many stunning lines in here, I can’t even pick one!
I loved your use of the word ‘stories’ in all it’s senses, the variety of sentence structures, the impeccable word craft…
Wonderful though some of this challenge’s other entries have been I would be dumbstruck if this didn’t win – MH :)
I have to ditto MH’s comment, since it covers what I wanted to say. Good story.
Absolutely breathtaking. I don’t really have anything more to say.
Beautiful. This is a wonderful piece. Well done!
Excellent.
Thanks so much, everyone. I’m really happy with the way this turned out.
This was definitely the winner. It really captures the thoughts someone would have before jumping.
Exquisite.
nice but one question what is Zero?
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}
Mostly Harmless
Krulltar
Lighty
Lady Venuquin
lastsyllable
Larlar
Lone Writer
geekwraith
{DARCH}Loa