Handful of spelling errors and one errant comma near the end.

It’s an interesting premise, but it would be more interesting if you did more showing, less telling with this one.

This is basically the start of a story I’ve had in my head a while. Interested to see how others will progess it.

hmm, so spelling aside, whose essence, or being could possess the book? Has a Harry Potter Horcrux feel to it.. or could this be a GOOD influence? The book contains something so powerful it brings about world peace or something through one person.. It’s a thinker.