First, welcome to Ficly, my friend. Nice to have another familiar face here. :)

Second, not a bad start. Handful of typos that can be cleaned up, but other than that, I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Thanks Jim, I’ll have to go through it again, must not be glaring grammar errors, probably structural ones.
:-)

Done some revisions, fixed a couple things and made a couple alterations that hopefully made it flow better.

Originally written in 2003.