ahahaha wonderful dru. at first I thought “augh more zombies” but you made everything better

That was great Dru, I loved the concept from the beginning but that last line was brilliant.

Thanks guys, I’m glad the ending works!

Zombstein

This is really my favorite kind of short story. Quick, to the point, and with an awesome final line.

I think having an awesome final line is a prerequisite for a good short story.

I liked it. The one thing I would change is a period instead of a comma after “we were wrong.” Adds more gravitas, you know what I mean?

That’s a good observation olivaw.

Well, except that it would then be a fragment and not a sentence.

There. Fixed it and it’s not a fragment either. :)

hahaha, this is pretty great Druhim

Well done, sir.

Oh the irony! This is great and the last line is just killer.

Excellent!

Interesting sequence of final thoughts.. I mean if I were about to be eaten by Zombestein I’d be thinking of ways to escape. Once I was well hidden far far away, I might note the irony.

I guess you missed that bit about being paralyzed.

Very nice!

Spiffy!

ahaha. Lovin’ it Dru.

Very nice

Nice. Damn you, Einstein!

Einstein is even smarter than us when when he’s dead. It’s a damn shame..! Crazy concept Dru. Appreciated.

Nice refresher in the world of zombie-dom. Reminds me of the series on ficlets in which a zombie Karl Marx came into play, I think.

Obviously, the Einstein idea was awesome.

That last line was pretty amazing.