The Rapture Inhibitor!

I love that ‘It is far from the smell of grass.’ has its own paragraph, it really gives some weight to the line.

Also I should have known you’d be the one to kill god, NaS.

Very dark and tech-heavy tone, I can almost see the speaker with a half chewed cigar in one hand and a scotch in the other.

I love how you change your color palette slowly throughout your story. Beautiful.

Creative use of the letter L. Magnificent!

I really like the overall tone and the last line is so wonderfully matter of fact.