Okay, that’s the one I meant to publish, missing a full line of dialogue so that it was way beneath the character limit so it would publish.

What a way to start ficly off (for reals, not on accident… the duck suit is funny though)!

It’s odd, but I totally get Kyle’s logic. And I don’t even have asthma. First new Ficly I’ve read and it’s a corker :)

I LOVE the last line! awesome way to begin…
Way awesome THX – good to read your stuff again.

The dialogue is obviously what makes the story. Funny, quirky execution of a thought-provoking idea.

This is terrific! Just the kind of stuff I’ve come to expect and enjoy from you, THX.

“You been double-dipping your asthma meds again?”

That’s one of the best lines I’ve ever read!

I was just thinking that “double-dipping asthma meds” was the sort of phrase only Dr. THX could come up with.

Of course, being asthmatic, I think it kinda sounds like fun. And a bit trippy.

awesome!

I very much enjoyed your story. It made me giggle. Good read.

Thought-provoking and dryly funny in equal measure. A sure-fire winner of a short story. =))

This story is out of control awesome.

This is great fun. I can just picture it – some poor berk staring at his lunatic scientist friend dashing about a physics lab. Fine comical dialogue.

I could just see this argument going on in my head… It makes me laugh.