I know it was rushed, but this one, I really struggled with the character limit. I ended up erasing most of the dialogue and sort-of-explanations, so… The explanations will have to coem later!

Also, the breaking the leg thing may not be lol, I almost put politically exactly correct, but it’s my version of it and that’s all that matters, right?

Why would you try to stand after someone tells you not to?

Proper paragraph breaks would make an outstanding improvement to story flow.

Mr. Stitzel, I couldn’t break the paragraph because I ran out of characters, and as already stated in my earlier comments, I already erased most of the dialogue and other important aspects to this piece. I thank you for the suggestion, and will attempt to edit my story to suit with paragraph breaks. Sorry if I come across as rude.

Oops. Didn’t mean to have the rating, stupid computer.