This is one of the most beautiful stories I have read with the 1024 limit.
The smells, the colors, just everything… I was there.
Beautifully written. I can’t wait to read more.

very nice story i like the imagery and how u refer to death as"The Friend". nice piece i like it

I love all of the descriptions!! And I also liked how you called death ’ the friend’ because it allowed the reader to enjoy the situation without forming a judgement. Great job!!