Comments on Picking Up A Few Things (shopping list challenge) by ElshaHawk (LoA)

ALRO613 (LoA)

Are there bonus points for the “Twilight” reference. LOL
Pretty funny..
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Nymphaea Rose

lol I agree with ALRO. Loved the Twilight thing added with it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
OrangeOreos (LoA)

Psh. Twilight… Ruining vampires since 2005.

But, that aside, I loved the oblivious protagonist.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

Aww, thanks everyone! I threw that in there so those who didn’t pick up on the garlic and tent stakes (like the protagonist) might get it by the end.
poor protagonist, so oblivious!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Silly teenagers and their “sparkly” pseudovampires. They know nothing of the crunch!

Wonderful story, I love it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Ridcully Calvert

I liked this list, but it wasn’t as totally awesome as your other one. The idea is definitely still worth five pencils, though
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5