Eerie. I love it.

Thanks! :)

Excellent entry for the challenge, very evocative.

Thanks! I had several false starts on this before I found the one that spoke to me.

Ooh, what could the bundle possibly be I wonder? Tantalising and yet the story feels complete, not lacking anything. Very nice set-up at the start too, nice and atmospheric.

Thanks for entering Jim

Thanks! I’m already thinking about how to spin it into a longer yarn.

Loved the mood here!