Oh I like this. The bit of humor in the beginning adds to the humanness of it all. Perhaps another sequel is in order. To the writing boards!
Oh I like this. The bit of humor in the beginning adds to the humanness of it all.
Perhaps another sequel is in order. To the writing boards!
It adds the rebel element back in, glad the MC didn’t lose that! I was wondering how they were chained though.. you never described that.
soup 
ElshaHawk (LoA) soup ElshaHawk (LoA)